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英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第一篇

It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season in the year is coming.

Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They are now expecting a good harvest through a summers hard work.

The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as the maple leaves fall onto the sky.

It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.

I love the beautiful season.

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第二篇

Teamwork and cooperation is significant for man's activities, including the business work, family life, social activities, even the social development. In the current stiff competition of our society, teamwork is the protection of executive force and the improvement of great efficiency.

In terms of maintaining teamwork spirit, cooperation is the most significant. With the rapid technological specialization and social development, more and more tasks need to be accomplished with a collaborative effort. On the other hand, social development can’t be without social division of labor, as the saying goes many hands make light work. Through cooperation within the team, member of the society complement each other’s weaknesses with their strengths. Then the efficiency of social construction, production, and other social activities could get great improvement.

The society like a big machine composed of many a part, cooperation is the grease which ensure its good running. While parts of the machine drop, it stops working immediately. All these tell us that union is strength. Only by doing the teamwork and cooperation well, so can the potential creativeness be fully reached and the overall goal of the development be achieved smoothly!

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第三篇

中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我市 河源参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求: 1. 100 词左右; 2. 要点包括: a. 有悠久的历史,位于广东的东北部,离广州 198 公里,人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹,如苏家围( Sujiawei );万绿湖( WanluLake )等等;万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方,湖水清澈,无污染;湖中有各种各样的鱼;你可以到那里划船,野餐,钓鱼,是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观河源市博物馆,在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石( fossil )。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

Thank you.

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第四篇

It is said that the scene of sunrise is beautiful, but I had never seen it before.

It was so hot lastnight that I didnt sleep well. Early this morning I got up and came to the balcony to relax. Itwas cool outside. I looked up at the sky, the sparse stars twinkling there. Everything aroundme was dim. I gazed at the east, where the sky was lightening. After a while, the starsdisappeared and the buildings, trees, streets in the distance could be seen faintly. Slowly, thehorizon in the east was becoming reddish.

The red color extended continuously and wasbecoming thicker and thicker. At last the sun showed its face a little, gradually into a halfflaming ball, and whole ball appeared, shining brightly. Everything around me was clear. What abeautiful sunrise I saw!

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第五篇

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.

Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第六篇

To be successful, students learn many knowledge so as to master as more skills as possible. Some believe that the key to realize our dreams is to work hard and others treat chance in the first place. While today is the information world, the one who masters the all-sided source will have more chances to be successful. In my opinion, the most important skill is the social skill, because we need to make connection with others, we are not doing business with ourselves, so it is in need of having relationship with others. The good social skill can help us attract attention easily and impress the future partner. If we are bad in communicating, how can we let others know our advantages and trust us. So promoting ourselves is the first job, from now on, don’t be shy.

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第七篇

Dear Haiqing,

I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.

To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?

Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?

Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.

Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?

Keep in touch.

Yours

Huangping

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第八篇

Recently, a piece of news reported that a girl and her boyfriend made a plan to kill her parents. Luckily, her father was alive for the wrong shot. When the policemen spend two years to make the truth come out, the family was shocked, because the reason was that the parents loved their daughter too much. The fact was that it was love made this tragedy happen. The parents had high expectation on their daughter. Since she was very small, she was sent to learn many skills. Everytime when taking the exams, the girl felt great pressure. She even lied to her parents, just not to let her parents down. The reason of love is many parents’ excuse to make every decision for their kids and ignore their feelings. If the kids resist, then the parents will say it is because of love. Love has become a great burden for many young people. Parents need to consider the kids’ feelings.

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第九篇

in recent year,overseas studying is very popular。 more and more people go abroad in order to studying。

different people have different idears on this phenomenon。some people think that it is no neccersary,beacause they think that the knowledge in motherland is enough。however,other people approve of overseas studying。they think it is helpful to improve themselves in learning and working。

in my opinion,it is beneficial。first,it provides many chances for people who want to make progress;second,it is a mind—exparding experience,people who went abroad can obtain the culture,customs and so on;third,facing with the vocational pressure nowdays。it is very important chances to overseas studying 。

so ,i think overseas studying is very important to everyone。

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第十篇

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My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers an plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate. On the right of the hall is a sitting room, there we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a puter room and a study belonging to me. On the second floor, there are six bedrooms with bathrooms. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by puters, vision phones, lifts an automatic doors. Well, that is my dream house.

我梦想中的房子是建在海边的一幢别墅。有两个别墅庭院。前院是一个有很多美丽的花的植物在四个季节的花园。后院有一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳。在一楼,有一个大厅,当你进入大门。在大厅的右边是客厅,在那里我们可以放松,休息,看电视,享受娱乐。在左边有一个电脑室和一个属于我的书房。在二楼,有六间卧室和浴室。别墅配有现代化设备,如电脑控制的安全报警器,可视电话,电梯和自动门。嗯,那是我梦想中的房子。

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第十一篇

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her eyes will encourage me and help me cheer up.

When I began learning to walk, mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to stand up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes Smiled with praise. Aftei I entered the school, mother's eyes still encouraged me. Once I failed my Chinese exam, my mother helped me find out the reasons instead of blaming me. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mother's eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我的母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。每当我遇到困难时,这双眼睛总是鼓励我,帮我振作起来。

在我开始学走路时,母亲总是帮助我,鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠扑进她怀抱时,她的双眼充满赞扬之情。我长大上学后,母亲的眼睛仍旧鼓励我。一次,我语文考试不及格,母亲没有责备我,而是帮助我找出原因。现在,我长大了,不再让她操心了。但每当我遇到挫折时,母亲的眼睛总是伴随着我,给我鼓励。

英语作文高分范文赏析模板 第十二篇

Recently, the news reported a fireman was retired and he handed in an application for his dog, which had worked with him for more than eight years. The fireman wanted his “brother” to go home with him, because the dog had also came to his time for retirement. The story moves so many people, the relationship between animal and human being is always the most touching. Dogs are men’s loyal friends, their affection to master is pure and true. In the movie Hachi, the dog spends all his life to wait for the return of his master. Everybody can’t help tearing when they see this scene. The fireman and his dog had been a team for many years and they are families. There are so many stories like them, animal are our friends, the harmonious environment will be built if animals and human beings get well along.

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